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Does Pakistani society regard women as the Angel in the house or the source of all evils? (CSS ESSAY 2011)
*Introduction
*Eve’s daughter
*Pre and after Islamic period
*Reasons: Why Pakistani society regards woman as an Angel
a. House would be a desert without woman
b. Beloved for thousands of lovers
c. Blessing of God
d. Her lap is first tuition of a child
e. Ray of hope for husband
*21st century and Pakistani society
*Woman and her characters
a- Daughter
b-Sister
c-Wife
d-Mother
*Arfa Karim is known an Angel
*Benazir Bhutto and her place in hearts’ of people.
Misconceptions regarding women as source of all Evils
a. Honor Killings
b. Daughter as curse
c. Bride becomes burden on account of Dowry
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d. Lack of awareness and Negligence of Islamic teachings
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Woman is one of the most beautiful creations of God. She possesses Angelic light in her soul _pack of feelings, she is. Indeed, Pakistani society regards woman as the Angel in the house. She has born the greatest prophets, messengers, mystics, Sufi and pious people and she has been mother goddess_ Heaven is under feet of mother. Thousands of lovers have been praising her beauty and she has ever been goddess of love. Pakistani society is based on Islam and Islam regards woman more the Angel. Woman has been never the source of all evils but somewhere at some stage she is blamed. Awareness has eradicated roots of ignorance and Falsehood is perished when light of truth enters.
If one peeps into pages of History, he will notice first sin on earth was committed by Cain the son of Adam who had killed his brother Abel just for sake of marrying eve’s daughter. This story is told in bible and Quran. People think Cain had killed his brother because of a woman and they considered woman as source of evil. It has been misconception in minds of thousands of people on earth even Pakistanis think alike. If a diamond is kept on a road and two people see it simultaneously, both try to take it and start fighting and one kills the other. Would a sensible man say DIAMOND is source of evil? Awareness and education in Pakistan has changed the minds of people the truth has perished the falsehood, as was perished by Prophet Mohammad PBUH.
Before Islam the woman was known curse_ source of evils, was practiced worse than slaves, they had no freedom and free will, they were used for one purpose. In any home where a daughter got birth she was known curse and either she was engraved alive or fired or thrown In ditches or sold in pennies, she was killed to death before her innocent eyes putt glance over this world, People were female infanticides. Women’s conditions were speechless, she was a prize in wars but after Islam, Prophet Mohammad almost eradicated these customs of ignorant people that were started since ice ages, stone ages and dark ages, daughters were then declared as a blessing, mother was said three times greater than father and she was given basic rights and Prophet Mohammad PBUH says. “He is worst who is worse with his wife and children.” Islam taught everyone about status of Woman. God didn’t create Eve from the Feet of Adam to be made ashes of shoe and neither had he created from hands to be made slave. She was created from wrist of Adam to stand in equilibrium. Then, it echoed from place to place and woman was known a blessing and regarded as an Angel.
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Pakistani society regards woman as Angel because they know her value, status and teachings of Islam regarding them. Women plays vital role in Pakistani society and walks equally with man on way of life. Following reasons are why Pakistani society regards woman as an Angel.
A. Every Husband in home knows about her wife and praises her daily hard work. When wife goes to her parents for a weak; whole house becomes boring and empty. Husband feels sad and knows her value when he cuts his finger in kitchen. Children miss their mother. When she returns back, again house blooms up, smile flashes over lips of husband and children run towards their mother. That moment every Pakistani Husband calls her Angel and say, “House would be a desert without woman.”
B. There are thousands of lovers and beloveds in Pakistan. Girls’ beauty has made thousands of preys. And, love teaches boys simplicity, struggle, affection and humanity. They sing songs of praise for girls. True love teaches them what life is. They become writers, poets and artists. For those lovers she is more than an Angel _more than everything. Those lovers become soft hearted and their hearts becomes pack of feelings. They respect women truly and regard them as Angels in the pure land of Pakistan.
C. Prophet Mohammad PBUH has taught that Daughter is blessing of God. She is a blessing for home where she is born. Pakistani society has left almost the pre-Islamic-miscomputations. They have come to know that daughter is a creation of God and God ever tries to bless his creatures. With the passage of time everyone has come to awareness and all differences are flown away. And, misconceptions regarding a daughter are blown away by the teachings of Islam. Now, when daughter is born she is not made sleep in the lap of Death but in the lap of her mother.
D. Lap of mother is first tuition of a child. She teaches her child how to talk, eat, walk and behave. She moves heavens into earth and nourishes her them. How beautiful child becomes in lap of her mother. Those children who know value of their mothers they call them Angels. Mothers in Pakistan have born those children who love their mothers more than their lives. How can a moth insult the candle or how can red-legged-partridge avoid the moon? Mother’s lap teaches them love. So, a child who loves his mother he regards her more than Angels.
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E. When the havoc and critical circumstances are loaded over husband’s back, there only his life-Partner helps and shoulders him and becomes a ray of hope. She tries each and everything to help her husband. This is only thing which takes husband towards peaks of success. She tells the husband about his responsibilities and he becomes aware. They both collectively face all difficulties of life and they both become difficult for difficulties. That time when wife supports her husband entirely: She becomes an inestimable ruby for husband. This theme is in houses in Pakistan where woman does all for her husband and husband calls her fairy of dreams. And, indeed, “There Is a Woman behind Every Successful Man.”
Marshall McLuhan’s says, “The world has become a global village.” Everything has been become more common. People of 21st century have been very advanced that the awareness has been spreading in every house of Pakistan. Electronic and Printing media has played a crucial role in society of Pakistan. Woman has been known about their rights. Islamic teachings regarding woman have become common in every house. When awareness comes in mind all illusions are vanished away. Indeed, that awareness has come in houses of Pakistan and all misconceptions are eradicated. Undoubtedly, there are houses in Pakistan which are following old traditions and trends but forget not! A small candle of light vanishes all dark of a room.
Woman passes her life with different stages, somewhere she is a daughter, somewhere she is a sister, somewhere she is a wife and somewhere she is a mother. Her every character plays a vast role in society of Pakistan. These characters make them angels.
A. When she is a daughter she is a blessing, she brings smiles to her parents and family. She becomes a source of joy _blessings of God pours down over that house where a daughter is born. She helps her mother and becomes a source of help. She becomes proud for her father.She beautifully plays role of daughter. Daughter in Pakistan is respected and she is regarded as a little angel.
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B. When she is a sister, she becomes a help for her brother. They play, read, walk and dine together. She cooks for her brother and family. She becomes a part of her brother’s life. A sister for her brother is precious. There is unbreakable bond between every brother and sister in Pakistan. For every brother his sister is a fairy.
C. When she is a wife, she is shoulder for her husband. She does all for her husband. She helps him in every circumstance and manages in all critical situations. And, Islam teaches not to behave with wife like a beast. Pakistani society and all husbands respect their wives; he will be a beast who treats his wife like a slave. Wife in every house of Pakistan plays a vital and vast role. She makes every comfort for her husband. Indeed, they both become angry with each _the more they become angry the more love they make. While she crosses the character of wife she becomes a mother which every woman loves to be.
D. She bears extreme pain when she begets a child _the pain which a human bears when he dies. She gives her meal to her child and doesn’t sleep before her child sleeps. She can’t sleep whole night when her child is out of home. A mother loves her child more than her life. She wants to give each and everything of world. Why should she not be called an Angel when “Heaven is under feet of mother?” One can guess about what is status of Mother in the sight of Prophet Mohammad and God. Our society is an Islamic society where a mother is more than everything; Hindus in our society call their mothers the MOTHER GODDESS.
The youngest master-mind girl Arfa Karim who in 2004 at the age of nine years became Microsoft Certified Professional (MCP)_I would not say her LATE ARFA KARIM on account of she is alive in every heart of Pakistani and her name is written with golden colours in books. On 14 January 2012 when she left this mortal world, every Pakistani’s eyes had become misty. She was an Eternal Angelwho had done miracles in young age and it is law of nature that they live little who do miracle in young age. Death is not end of life but Identification is last of life. Arfa Karim has done this and her name flies in faithful flights. She is regarded a little Angel of Pakistan.
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Benazir Bhutto the first prime-minister of Muslim world still lives in the hub of hearts. She was known an international leader and thousands of Pakistanis take her name with respect. When she was martyred on 27 December 2007 every Pakistani soul had mourned. She was more than everything for Pakistanis and fortunate are those who get martyrdom. She is alive and will be. She had become first prime-minister of Muslim countries and one can guess how Pakistani society respects the woman. Her name is still famous and echoes in every corner of Pakistan.
It can’t be that every man can become holy and pious. Everything has an opposite of it. Right has wrong and negative has positive. Same, the misconception about women are still in many minds. But, falsehood is not for ever, awareness has been spreading almost everywhere in Pakistan. But at some places still misunderstandings dwell which have been misconceptions in neurons of minds. Misconceptions are discussed below.
A. Honour killing is worst crime, which is being committed in places of Pakistan. If woman goes out a wild man (her brother or father) beheads or balds her with axes. It has been an ordinary crime. It is against every religion, as well as in Islam it’s prohibited because Quran says: “if you kill one man you kill whole humankind.” Men have reached the moon but he has not changed his nature of wildness, He remains a wild beast and where he sees any sparkle he comes to guns, axes and swords and kill girls for the sake of honor and then they curl their mustaches that they did a quite good job. They still think that their daughter can be a spot on their respect but it is a mammoth misunderstanding. Misconception has fulfilled their minds that woman is source of evil which is not like that. They do this just for sake of own mean and interest and blame the innocents.
B. Daughter is still known a curse in some villages of Pakistan where awareness has not arrived. She is still been killed when she is born. Why? On account of they think she is a curse. But, it is a delusion which is going on for decades. They forget that God has promised for everyone’s food but narrow-mindedness tells them “She will be a burden.” Just to be saved they call her she is EVIL. But, fact is beyond their minds.
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C. There are many poor families in Pakistan which cannot afford for marriage of their daughters and can’t give dowry. In society parents of those daughters are mocked and being helpless those parents call their daughters hapless. A day comes when father kills her daughter saying her burden or daughter suicides herself. But, it is system of society in some places. If a man falls in ditch, ditch will not be blamed.
D. Those houses where people are educated and sensible, they respect their daughters, sisters, wives and mothers. But, there are many houses where awareness is not reached and they consciously avoid teachings of Islam. They avoid that daughter is a blessing and heaven is under feet of mother. But when light of truth shall enter through ventilations in the houses of unaware people then all the misconception will be flown away and they will say “WOMAN IS AN ANGEL ON EARTH.”
Islam has taught to respect the women and if one comes to know about status of a woman he shall not hesitate to call her AN ANGEL. World would be ravaged if there was no woman. Awareness has told Pakistani society that women are Angels not source of all evils. I end up with the quotation of Thomas C. Halliburton “A woman has two smiles that an angel might envy, the smile that accepts a lover before words are uttered, and the smile that lights on the first born babe, and assures it of a mother’s love.”
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Hmm Zuhaib Ahmad ur easy is realy admirable and likely to be an alacrity for the checkers..! But the conculsion must be reduced alittle !
overall i like it
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Hmm Zuhaib Ahmad ur easy is realy admirable and likely to be an alacrity for the checkers..! But the conculsion must be reduced alittle !
overall i like it
Thanks for your appreciation. I had thought to lengthen the conclusion a bit more but your advice differed my thought. Thanks, Keep on commenting.
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My comments on your Essay
+ I liked some of your ideas and examples.
+ You went at some places kind of irrelevant.
+ You used the first person pronoun “I”. Avoid it.
+Try to incorporate as many facts, concepts and practical examples as you can.But remember they all should be in neat relevance to the subject.
+ Keep attempting essays on different topics and this would enhance your writing skills.
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Woman is regarded as the angel in the house for the following reasons
(RELIGIOUS)
•Social Structure of Pakistan is raised on Islamic Ideology in which Woman has an angelic status.
•The highest award in Islam is Paradise which is placed beneath the feet of a mother
•God chose the example of mother in illustration of his love with the humanity.
•HOOR (The finest, The holy woman creature in Paradise) as a distinctive reward to the pious man in their life hereafter.
•A delicate and respectful treatment with woman is ordered in Islam
• (Example of Holy Prophet’s PBUH affectionate behavior with his wives, daughters and other woman members of his family and the society at large )
•Man is asked to lower his eyes in front of a woman.
(Cultural Concepts)
•Woman is adored as a symbol of man’s honor (Even a single word of disrespect to one’s woman is the worst of all attacks to man’s pride and reputation)
•Means of her livelihood, her care, custody, love and respectful place in society are the prime responsibilities of a man.
•Woman is kept in the precious custody as are kept diamond and other valuables.
•In public places, outdoors, a woman is extended a reverential response. (Ladies first)
•In Pakistani culture female are given more respect than their male counterparts.
•Disobedience to a mother is considered the most unlucky act. Life long misfortune in the world and pitiless punishment in hell after death.
•Prayer of a mother changes the destiny.
•Males do not work in house. Woman is the mistress there. House is turbulent in her absence. Its like a flower without fragrance and color.
•Behind every successful man there stands a woman.
(As a source of all evils…….. A misunderstanding)
•Due to joint family structure, home infightings are common. The cause of which is attributed to women in general cases.
•In rural and undeveloped areas across Pakistan there are tribal disputes. One of the major causes of these disputes is over women like honor killing in Sindh.
These killings prolong the disputes and people think of woman as the bone of contention
•She is sold , purchased and given as ransom and compensation. She is so ill treated as if she were an evil in the society.
•Women empowerment is unacceptable to some extremist and age old traditional sections of the society.
Sexual harassment, rap cases, women in showbiz, social immoralities and vulgar practices in youth, culture of boy and girl friends, Co-working and co-education and all their negative upshots are associated with women empowerment process.
(Conclusion)
Majority of Pakistani society is observing the good religious and cultural values according to which woman is positioned at a venerable position in the society.
She is thought of as a divine blessing. Her birth in home is considered as a gracious gift of Allah. She is entitled to delicate and honorable treatment throughout her life.
While in some of the secluded and undeveloped regions of the country woman is misconceived as the source of all evils and these misconceptions are due to obscurity and barbaric traits. Such thinking towards woman is gradually disappearing in the wake of educational campaigns and development programs across the country.
Such efforts should be doubled and their pace needs to be increased so that our society at large may become free of all misunderstandings and bestial attitude towards woman.
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Thanks for appreciation.
Yes, I had not to use “I” but I did.
What were places where I went irrelevant?
Your outline is good, dear.
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Thanks for appreciation.
Yes, I had not to use “I” but I did.
What were places where I went irrelevant?
Your outline is good, dear.
Lovers and beloved… (specially extra marrital love ) is not a positive phenomenon in Pakistani Society. you lengthened it.
you dealt the role of wife twice in different paragraphs in first A and second C.
these both paragraphs had to be inter connected under the caption of woman characters.. as a wife.
dear you were also asking questions like it was a debate or discussion and not an essay.. i think asking questions also have a bad impression in essay.,..
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Lovers and beloved… (specially extra marrital love ) is not a positive phenomenon in Pakistani Society. you lengthened it.
you dealt the role of wife twice in different paragraphs in first A and second C.
these both paragraphs had to be inter connected under the caption of woman characters.. as a wife.
Thanks. How is my style of writing? what does it need?
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dear you were also asking questions like it was a debate or discussion and not an essay.. i think asking questions also have a bad impression in essay.,..
Really? It should be conformed.
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regarding your writting style:
1.you have a nice sense of diction.
2.your arguments are influential
you need to:
write some idioms, phrasal verbs and some how proverbs too.
plus points:
the way you are composing is commendable indeed . your writing,over all, retains a good linquistic effect.
still need to upgrade its standard….
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regarding your writting style:
1.you have a nice sense of diction.
2.your arguments are influential
you need to:
write some idioms, phrasal verbs and some how proverbs too.
plus points:
the way you are composing is commendable indeed . your writing,over all, retains a good linguistic effect.
still need to upgrade its standard….
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Thanks, Dear.
I have ample of time _time and practice will beautify it and it will fructify.
Thanks a lot for your suggestions and appreciations.
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Aoa,
Zuhaib, I went through some of the starting paragraphs of your essay’s conclusion and will suggest some revisions on following pattern:
‘Woman’ is one of the most beautiful creations of God. She possesses Angelic light in her soul _pack of feelings, she is. Indeed, majority of population in (as to we should not be so inclusive of all) Pakistani society regards woman as the Angel in the house. She has born the greatest prophets, messengers, mystics, Sufis and pious people and has been mother goddess_ Heaven is under feet of mother. Thousands of lovers have been praising her beauty and she has ever been goddess of love. (What do u want to say, elaborate) Pakistani society is an Islamic Society and Islam regards woman more the Angel. Woman has been never the source of all evils but somewhere at some stage she is blamed. Awareness has eradicated roots of ignorance and Falsehood is perished when light of truth enters.
If one peeps into pages of History, he will notice first sin on earth was committed by Cain the son of Adam who had killed his brother Abel just for sake of marrying eve’s daughter. This story is told in bible and Quran. People think Cain had killed his brother because of a woman and they considered woman as source of evil. ) People generally refer to the story told in Bible and Quran; first murder on earth was committed by Cain the son of Adam who had killed his brother Abel just for sake of marrying eve’s daughter. They attribute that Cain killed his brother because of a woman and regard woman as eve’s daughter as reason of that blood. This has been misconception in minds of many people and some of the Pakistanis even think alike. (we my cite this example as:) If two persons start a fight over a diamond and one of them gets killed, can a just person blame the diamond as the reason for the murder! If a diamond is found on a road and two people see it simultaneously, both try to take it and start fighting and one kills the other. Would a sensible man say DIAMOND is source of evil? Awareness and education in Pakistan has changed the minds of people the truth has perished the falsehood, as was perished by Prophet Mohammad PBUH. (This line seems irrelevant here)
(Before Islam, woman was thought to be a curse ) Before Islam woman was known curse_ source of evils, was practiced worse than slaves, they had no freedom and free will, they were used for one purpose(what purpose are u referring to??).
In any home where a daughter was born, she was taken as a sign of curse. Either she was killed to death before her innocent eyes putt glance over this world or sold in pennies. The then People were female infanticides. Women’s conditions were worst, even pathetic. Our Holy Prophet Mohammad (PBUH) overthrew these customs of ignorant people that were being followed since ice ages, stone ages and dark ages. He (PHUB) gave women their proper place and declared daughters as a blessing. Prophet Mohammad PBUH said. “He is worst who is worse with his wife and children”. Islam gave women a new identity and unveiled the forgotten proper place in front of humanity. Islam told that God didn’t created Eve from the feet of Adam to be made ashes of shoe and neither had he created from hands to be made slave. She was created from wrist of Adam to stand in equilibrium.
U may revise the rest on the above pattern.
Following things you should consider:
1. Avoid mere wordiness; Be precise & to the point.
2. Avoid making lengthy sentences. Incorporate only one idea in a sentence. Craft small and compact sentences.
3. Maintain a symmetry (Link each passage with the latter one)
4. Use punctuations properly.
Hope this would prove useful..
Duaon ki darkhuast!
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