My speech evaluation is based on Steve Jobs’ Inspirational Speech, “If today were the last day of my life. ” He was trying to persuade the audiences that whatever you do, follow your heart, if you were to die tomorrow, would you want to do this. During his speech, he said that, “I ask myself if today were the last day of my life, would I want to do what I am about to do today? And whenever the answer is no for too many days in a row, I know I need to change something. ” He also said that, “Remember I am going to be dead soon, is the most important tool he ever encountered to make the big choices in life. Steve effectively delivered his message.
The speech is very inspirational that after the speech, I feel like I need to change my life. First of all, according to O’Brien, in order to make the speech persuasive, you have to be able to build a rapport and show the audiences that you are sincere and trustworthy. Steve Jobs, co-founder of Apple, best known as the inventor of iPhone. He brought Apple from near bankruptcy to profitability. He supported his thesis with his own story, that he has cancer and he only has three to six months to live.
His background also gave him some advantages because he is successful. The structure of the speech is very well organized. He first had a connection with the audiences with a question, and then he declared his thesis, after that he supported his thesis with his story, and finally he concluded his speech by saying goodbye to his family. That’s what makes the speech so powerful and persuasive. In addition, in order to deliver a message successfully, a connection with the audiences is very important because this will help better engage the audiences.
The Essay on The daily life of teenagers today and that of young people 100 years ago
Abstract Developments in the world throughout the years have greatly impacted the world in various ways. These developments include technological and socio-political changes. These changes have made social activities today to become incomparable with those from a hundred years ago. In this case teenagers as a social group have fell victim to these changes as. This fact easily unveils itself when ...
Steve made a very well connection with the audiences. He started his speech with a question that he wants the audiences to ask themselves, “If today were the last day of my life, would I want to do what I am about to do today? ” This is a very powerful connection because human fear death. Most people in the society today don’t like what they are doing, but because they need to do it for a living. Steve wants to them to realize that do what they want, because you never know when you are going to die one day. Finally, he ended the speech with a strong conclusion. A conclusion is very important.
As O’Brien said, a conclusion is the last set of words you leave with your audiences. Steve Jobs know he is going to die soon, and he took this speech as an opportunity to say goodbye to his family. This will make the audiences realize that he is not saying all these things just to tell them to follow their dreams as everyone else. He is saying all these things because he means it, and he has been through all of that. This makes the conclusion strong because these are the last few words from him and that it leaves an unforgettable memory for the audiences. Overall, Steve Jobs successfully deliver his message to the audiences.
The speech is strong and powerful because he did an excellent job in organizing his speech, making a connection with the audiences, and ending the speech with a strong conclusion. Although Steve Jobs is not here with us today, but the speeches he gave is still powerful and memorable. He is no doubt an excellent public speaker.
