Smith was a religious, Christian man. His notion of monads included contextual references to God. He believed that God controls the harmony of life through these monads.
The essay then goes on to discuss these monads in a Christian context. Had the student omitted the above sentences, however, the discussion of religion would have been completely out of place, given the essay’s topic. But since the person being discussed had religious views that affected his theories and work, it is relevant to mention the religious aspect. Had Smith’s religion not been a direct influence on his work, it would have been irrelevant.
Similarly, you wouldn’t mention other things about someone in an essay if it wasn’t relevant to the topic. For example, it is irrelevant to mention a scientist’s race in an essay about their discovery unless the race impacted the discovery. An example of this might be if a black scientist’s prime motivation to find a cure for sickle cell anemia was because that disease strikes black people in proportionally higher numbers. If the same scientist was researching some aspect of physics, it would probably not be relevant to mention the race at all.
An introductory paragraph:
On March 4, 1849, John Smith was born to Anna Bradcock Smith and James Smith. Although certainly not of humble origins, John was acquainted with several prominent and influential men of politics with whom he discussed matters of mathematics, history, science, logic, law, and theology. Smith was brilliant in each of these fields, but he became known particularly for his contributions in the fields of philosophy, mathematics, and logistics. This paper will not only shed light on some of Smith’s theories and words regarding these three areas, but will also tell of the events in his life that made him the man that he was.
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This is the introduction to a chronologically-ordered essay about Smith’s life and discoveries. As such, the choice to begin with his date of birth is a good one. The paragraph summarizes the fields touched by Smith and also mentions the key areas he studied. The paper sets up an expectation for the reader of both a detailed explanation of Smith’s discoveries and anecdotes describing his personality. The sentence structure is grammatically sound and flows well.