The thatcher described from outsidethe mason speaks for himself Heaney accents strangeness and skill Hardy emphasises endurance Although methodical, there is a touch of the magical to the thatcher.We appreciate the mason’s humanity and kindness, rather than his skill.
Similarities and differences in the poets’ attitudes and the candidates’ personal preference:
What each poem is about:
Thatcher
•A description of a local workman: his manner, equipment, and work-materials.
•praise for the skill of the workman;
•the survival of a traditional craft.
The Old Workman
•An old stone-mason explains to a questioner why he has aged prematurely.
Candidates’ response to use of language:
Thatcher
•loose iambic pentameters, hinted rhyme (loosely decasyllabic lines, with irregular rhythm and hinted rhyme);
•the thatcher is in demand, conveyed by an old-fashioned phrase: “bespoke for weeks”;
•slow to start, his preparations are unhurried, and materials are tested before use;
•he is methodical and well-prepared: “laid out well-honed blades”;
•There are ideas of him slowly mastering the material “handful by handful”.
The image of the staple shows him getting it under control;
•heraldic term “couchant” may suggest the strangeness of the man and his work;
•verbs “shaved…. flushed…. stitched” convey meticulousness;
•honeycomb image suggests intricacy of what he constructs;
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•his audience, hitherto invisible, appear only as admiring gapers in final line – “they” – anonymous in the face of his skill;
•The transmuting Midas image concludes this poem of praise. The Old Workman
•poem in dialogue form, question and answer – the mason’s apologia for his life;
•rhymed quatrains, conversational rhythms;
•use of technical terms: “quoin”, “ashlar”, “freestone”;
•word “mansion” suggests social gulf between workman and his employers;
•permanence of his work;
•his sudden injury conveyed onomatopoeically, “crack”;
•echoed by his dialect description of himself as “crookt”;
•separation of workman and employer, poor and rich, is conveyed in several ways;
•his satisfaction that he has benefited his employers conveyed in dialect phrase “right and tight”;
•He has the workman’s satisfaction that his work will outlast him.
Candidates’ awareness of contexts:
Candidates may show awareness of some of the following:
•traditional crafts in Ulster;
•Heaney’s childhood in Co. Derry;
•Hardy’s father was a stone-mason
•ideas of the skilled craftsman and pride in one’s work;
•the reference to the mason’s “life’s ache “ evokes a world where an injured workman received no incapacity benefits, but worked on.